Wednesday, January 27, 2021

Small town boy part 2

 I am original author

Read part 1 again before reading this so you can get a feel of story

(If story have some grammar and spelling mistakes comment down what mistake i made i definitely change it)

Small town boy part 2

Disha

Ohh god not again I don't want to fall for any boy again.I heard a conversation between cute boy and mrs monster she was telling him to wear modern clothes.I mean why boys cannot wear whatever they want we women really judge them a lot .Mrs megha gave that angry look to me and said ohh look who is here miss perfectionist .  I Hate sarcasm keep quiet you monster i yell in my mind.my first impression on cutie is gone now . Wait why do i care mitali was right i always care what will boys think of me , be yourself disha be disha yourself by the way mitali is my best friend . She used to tell me your boyfriend is gold digger leave him but i was blind in love suddenly mrs monster snap and yell back to work . Still lost in thought I think mitali want to say be little rude so i can be stud like her . Mrs megha said punishment for being late take this boy to shopping get her appropriate cloth for receptionist . What! this worst punishment i will love to go jail then shopping with boy .  Mrs megha look toward cute boy and said disha look creepy but definitely not so you can trust her (they both laugh). what i said mom please don't make fun of me. Mrs monster is also my mom . Mom said this is not home so call me mrs megha .my mom is so professional and little weird .i said sorry then that cutie and me went for shopping . I want to be stud like my bestfriend mitali so i thought what is criteria to be stud to be little rude as they show in movies . So i decided i will change from now onwards i will be rude and become more stud then mitali and give her tips like she give tips to me . I was day dreaming suddenly cutie said hi my name is aman i replied ya whatever i don't care  . I thought that was too rude but i want to be stud u know that. He got little sad face still i wanna be stud so it's ok right. I went to parking to take my car he also followed .i sit in car started car he also followed me sit in car. To scare him i started driving fast he really got scared i laughed at him revenge successful he just pout he is so cute tho. Finally we reached mens cloth shop we went to counter he asked to select for him i picked one pink top and black skirt till knees . I said go to changing room and try he tried that dress he was looking gorgeous although he looks really uncomfortable in this cloth . I said don't worry you are looking great he said okay will buy it then . Now i was really confused how boy can select dress in one take my ex used to show so much tantrums . Finally we go to counter he said can you pay i smiled said all boys are gold digger .he got tears in eyes. I really felt bad now ok i don't want to be stud . This is all because of mitali i said in my head . I paid for that dress and also buy sandals having teady bear design for him . He left shop crying i followed tried to convince him holding my ears and sandals he wipes his tears and told his story and said he will return money after his 1st salary now i am feeling more guilty and proud of boy and his struggle how can someone call him gold digger . It's just my stupidity . I dropped him again at work place and call mitali told whole story and yell at her for stupid advice . She also yell back and said i never said  change yourself i told don't copy just be you and Stop watching stupid movies and stop calling me if i am giving garbage advice i suddenly remember this idea(of being rude) was because of movie but how she knows before i say something she cut the call . I really want to cry my mom is angry , cutie is angry and now mitali also but women don't cry you know......to be continued


6 comments:

  1. Awesome writing....
    You can add bike riding scence, fighting scence...
    Some romantic scences aman and disha in rain

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    1. Are you reading ayee cutie story all this fighting drama romance is included . Definitely this story also had romance .aman is angry on disha so mitali definitely had idea to turn this in romance (spoiler)

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  2. You should mention about the clothing and mannerisms of female characters.

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    1. Thanks for suggestion. But dear i mentioned in part 1 about women wear jeans and shirts . And women don't cry , women should treat men equally but still ifyou want some more laborate i will definitely add

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    2. You can add married men wear sindoor, mangal sutra, nose ring, bindi, ear ring, bangle, etc

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    3. As you can see story is moving really slowly (still building plot) so it can be big and great series but aman is not married so mangal sutra is not possible now but other jewellery definitely in next episode - hint maybe disha will suggest when they will fall in love to pierce nose to aman now he is scared of that piercing

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